Writing Narrative Assessment - 14 December 2016

Learner:  Edward    Learning Coach: Megan Croll - LH2        Date:14 December 2016

Learning Area:  Writing

Learning Observed

I read a story with the worm hapu titled ‘Crankenstein’.  This story was about a young boy who looked like any ordinary boy, but when faced with a rainy day, a melting popsicle, or an early bedtime, he transforms into a mumbling, grumbling Crankenstein!    After reading this story, I asked the learners to think about what makes them turn into a ‘crankenstein’.  Edward was asked to share his ideas with a partner, but was too shy to share with the larger group.   With some support from Mrs Paraha, his Teacher Aide, Edward wrote his ideas in his writing book.  He was able to clearly state his idea about what he doesn’t like to eat.  Edward is rewriting words when he feels that they are incorrect.  He correctly used a capital letter to start his sentence, with a full stop at the end.

Evidence of learning

Key Competencies/Vision Principles

Edward is demonstrating that he is: Connecting - making links to his personal life to that of the character in the book Capable - independently choosing an ideas and writing about is Using Language, Symbols and Text - writing high frequency words correctly and taking care to write the size and shape of most letters correctly.

Next Learning Steps

Share his ideas with a larger group Know when to correctly use capital letters Understand contractions and when to use an apostrophe, e.g. don’t

Zoo Trip - iExperience Narrative Assessment - 18 November 2016

Learner:  Edward      Learning Coach: Megan Croll - LH2       Date: 18 November 2016

Learning Area: Zoo Trip

Learning Observed & Key Competencies/Vision Principles

Today Edward joined LH2 and LH4 learners to travel by bus to the Auckland Zoo.   This trip was organised as part of our learning about animals - how we can help them and how they can help us.   The learners were greeted by some zookeepers when we arrived at the zoo.  We had morning tea and then, with a zoo map in hand, began our journey around the zoo.   The map was used frequently to help guide us around the zoo and many learners used their map reading skills to identify where we were and where we should go next (Using Language, Symbols and Text). After visiting the tortoises and reptiles, we met up with John from Auckland Zoo.   John took us into the Discovery and Learning centre where Edward found out what the zoo does to look after the three Sumatran tigers that they have.  John had a large black plastic container and Edward learned that the tiger would be able to smell his scent if he touched it (Connected). John then took us to the Vet Centre Viewing Gallery.   Edward learned that sometimes visitors can watch an operation take place, but today the windows were covered with curtains.  Here we learned how humans can make life very difficult for some animals.   Our plastic bags can be very dangerous to sea animals if they are swallowed.    After lunch, it was time for more exploring (Curious).  Edward enjoyed walking through the Meerkat tunnels, watching the playful orangutans and observing how gracefully the giraffes walk.  Our day at the zoo went very quickly and there wasn’t even enough time to play on the playground!   I’m sure that Edward would love to come back again with his family to share his learning with them.

Next Learning Steps

Edward has learned about what Auckland Zoo do to look after the many animals that they have.  Some are even endangered.  His next step could be to research an endangered animal to find out why it is endangered and what people are doing to help keep its species alive.